Camellia wrote:ok, so would I say that she was short-tempered, but became more patient. (And just give examples) And also her selflessness.
It is the Morality essay.
And I am thinking the theme miight be along the lines of: Sometimes women have a hard time finding a balance between being a lady and trying to fit into the world full of gender discrimination (other word??), the need to work, and staying genuine to herself. I am not even sure if I am going to try to go along those lines though. Any thoughts??
Yep, that sounds good!
DUH. I'm such an idiot. Well, you alsocould use selflessness as an opposite for her ambition. She was all ambitious to become a writer just to become famous. But, later she wrote for the sake of her family. Also, as you are using the quick temper example you could say how she was striving to perfect her character, and that she succeeded in learning to control her temper. (even though she didn't become a goody-goody)
That sounds like a great idea for the theme! However, remember that it has to apply to more than one character. You could think about what the girls all thought would make them happy (see the scene when they are making their dream mansions with Laurie after Camp Lawrence) and how they ended up. What really matters in life and what is the happiness that Marmee speaks about when she says "I could wish for no greater happiness for you" in the end during the orchard scene.